Searching For Evidence
找证据
Evidence
证据
The information you provide to support your point.
能支持你观点的信息
Where to Find Evidence:
到哪里找证据:
Quotations from novels
小说语录
Information from reputable non--fiction sources (books, websites, encyclopedias)
信誉良好的非小说源信息(书籍、网站、百科全书)
Quotations from experts
专家语录
Interview with people (friends, family, celebrities.)
采访的人(朋友,家人,名人专访)
Facts and statistics
事实和统计数据
Visual representations of facts/statistics (graphs, charts)
事实/统计数据的视觉陈述(图形,图表)
Questions:
问题:
Are women treated unfairly compared to men? Explain your answer using a range of evidence to support your ideas.
相对于男性,女性受到不公平对待?用一系列证据证明你的观点。
Point:
观点:
Women are treated unfairly as they are usually paid less than men for doing the same jobs.
女性受到不公平的对待,当他们做同样工作的时候,通常得到的报酬会比男性的少。
Matching evidence to your point:
将证据与你的观点相匹配
Evidence:
证据:
Men are twice as likely to get a promotion than women.
男性获得晋升的机会大概是女性的两倍。
Women in this Science Fields are paid 20% more than women in the Business Field.
在科学领域的女性获得的报酬比在商业领域的女性多20%。
Women in full—time paid work still earn 18% less than men in the same jobs.
在做同样的全职工作时,女性获得的报酬仍然比男性少18%。
Manipulating Evidence to Suit Point:
运用证据满足观点
“Despite the increasing pay rates in the past few decades, women in full—time paid work, with the exception of minimum—wage employment ,still earn 18% less than men in the same jobs. ”
“尽管在过去的几十年中工资率有所上升,但除去最低就业工资,全职女性的收入比在做同样工作的男性少18%。”
Could be refined to:
可以细化成:
“…women in full—time paid work… still earn 18% less than men in the same jobs”
“……全职工作的女性……仍然比在做同样工作的男性获得的报酬低18%。”
An ellipse (…) indicates you have left out some irrelevant information.
省略号(…)表示你已经省去了一些无关紧要的信息。
Could be extended to:
可以扩展为:
“despite the increasing pay rates in the past few decades, women in full—time paid work, with the exception of minimum—wage employment, still earn 18% less than men in the same jobs[she said ].”
“尽管在过去的几十年中工资率有所上升,但除去最低就业工资,全职女性的收入比在做同样工作的男性少18%。”【她说】
Brackets[ ]which contain extra information can add information to your quote that is needed for comprehension.
方括号【】包含额外的引用信息,这些信息能帮助读者更好地理解全文。
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